Which sentence would best replace the bold sentence in the provided passage?
As a young girl, I spent many summers on my grandparents’ farm in central California. They owned many acres of grape vineyards, some livestock, and an antique shop. Several of my cousins lived on the property as well, so there was never a lack of fun to be had. My grandfather would make huge bonfires and let all of us kids take turns throwing sticks and logs into it. A dangerous activity, I realized in adulthood, but splendid fun for me and my cousins. My grandmother would come to the window, hearing our shrieks of laughter, would see us dancing like banshees around the fire pit. There was never a place as wonderful as my grandparents’ farm, and the memories of those adventure-filled days still come rushing back to me when I return to visit.
Dancing like banshees around a massive fire pit, my grandmother would come to the window, shake her head in disbelief, and hear our shrieks of laughter.
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Our shrieks of laughter would often bring my grandmother to the window, where she would shake her head in disbelief at us kids dancing like banshees around a massive fire pit.
Shrieking with laughter and dancing like banshees, our actions would make our grandmother come to the window and shake her head in disbelief.
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