Question

Which is the *best* way to rewrite this sentence?   

“If one stops to watch the bakers make the doughnuts, you will be greeted with a smile.”

Accepted Answer

If you stop to watch the bakers make the doughnuts, you will be greeted with a smile.

Answer

One will be greeted with a smile if you stop to watch the bakers make the doughnuts.

Answer

If one stops to watch the bakers make the doughnuts, they will be greeted with a smile.

Answer

If the bakers making the doughnuts are watched, you will be greeted with a smile by them.

Question 28 - Writing Practice Test for the CBEST