“The toddler, running through the backyard while being barely observed by anyone.”
Is this sentence correct, as written, or would one of the following options be a better choice?
The toddler was barely observed by anyone running through the yard without being noticed.
The toddler, running through the backyard while being barely observed by anyone.
The toddler was barely observed by anyone while he ran through his backyard.
No one barely observed the toddler, as he ran through his backyard.
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