When proofreading, what is the main error that should be corrected in this conclusion?
In conclusion, the argument in the prompt relies on unsupported assumptions and cannot be considered reliable. The author fails to take other scenarios into consideration, including students who were unable to attend the protest due to financial reasons or prior obligations and statistics from other state colleges in the area and students who chose other ways of communicating their concerns, like letter-writing. Aside from all of this, state legislature should never consider cutting funds from state colleges anyway, as education is extremely important to society.
The last sentence interrupts the flow of the essay.
There are not enough transitional phrases.
There are grammar errors.
The sentences are awkward.
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